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Who are you, and what am I?
Remember me? I touched the sky
I flew too hard and burned too fast
Dreams like mine, they just don't last
I touched the sun on feathered limbs
I satisfied my wildest whims
But I burnt out, and I fell down
My body wasn't ever found
But don't remember me for how I failed
I embody all the dreams that've sailed
So who are you, and what am I?
Remember me? I wasn't afraid to fly.
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I consider this my classic poem. I wrote it quite a long time ago.. but I still consider it one of my best. Human nature, philosophy.. Icarus was the boy of Daedulus the inventor. He flew too high to the sun, causing the wax of his wings to melt, and fell. Most people point to the story as a form of "Know wisdom and temperance."

I prefer to think he died just the way he wanted to.

Kissing the sky.
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Gah I love this! This may sound weird but I'm getting a tattoo of Icarus' fall and was wondering if I could put this poem with it?
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~cybertrix Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my god that was amazing. i only wish i could write stuff like this. :hug:
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Mood: Longing ~ilikethesky Apr 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is beautiful!
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~Dewmandruid Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Rly awesome.
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Mood: Love ~Writer-In-Process Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was amazing! There have been many renditions of this story, but I think this one is the best!
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Mood: Love ~maltese-icarus Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Well done. Managed to put my believes into words!!
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~manathequeen Feb 17, 2012  Student Writer
it's beautifully written
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:iconayavidor:
Cool take on a classic story. I like how you returned to the beginning in the end. I really enjoy the way the poem flows. "I prefer to think he died just the way he wanted to." made me like the poem even more. That's a great interpretation; it made me think.
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Nice one, really enjoyed that piece :D
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